Post by x× | b | r o k e n on Jul 11, 2008 21:10:57 GMT -5
I need someone to Spell Cheak this for me please. My word doesn't word, it lets in a bunch of viruses which I have just discovered...
Name: Oakpaw
Gender: tom
Clan: ShadowClan
Age: 13 moons
Rank: apprentice
Personality: Oakpaw is a very bold and modest cat. He respects all his elder cats, no matter if he likes them or not. Being that he is brave, taking charge of hectic situations seems to come naturally to this young almost warrior. He is looking forward to becoming a warrior, and can't wait. Oakpaw admires his dark-pelted leader, and would love to be deputy, just, not to him. Darkstar, isn't the best of cats, or so he thinks. Oakpaw knows of RougeClan's and ShadowClan's obvious alliance. He despises bragging and boasting. Oakpaw is quiet most of the time, but, he is very polite, and obeys orders most of the time. When Oakpaw was a kit, he wanted to hunt and train. To him, it looked alot more fun and challenging, than galaranting around the nursery day and night. He gets up at dawn, and sneaks out of camp to try and train himself, seeing how Cottenpelt has not been training him. There always has to be something else happening... And, also, every once in awhile, Oakpaw wakes to hear him creeping out of the den, and leaveing camp.
Appearance: Oakpaw has a brown-gray coat with a hint of orange splashed into the mix. It is not fully grown yet, but, it seems to be growing into a handsome, meidium sized glowing mixture of colors. Oakpaw also only has minimum body bulid, but has a slim figure for he rarly eats. He has rich yellow brown eyes, with dark brown markings above both of them. His pads are coffee bean colored with jet black claws. Oakpaw's claws are sharp, and his teeth are white. His coat is thick and glossy, and clings to her like a magnate to a refrigerator. Oakpaw's ears are large and beautiful. Nice and evened out. The most surprising thing about him, is that he is blind. It dose not keep him from playing with his siblings, It actually makes his senses sharper. He has to sniff, and hear where they are. Oakpaw has white down along the rig of his spine, and it goes down to her tail.
History: Oakpaw's mother is Treeleg, but he does not know what she looks like. By the way she speaks he knows what a wonderful cat, and a wonderful mother she is. Oakpaw has 5 siblings. Ravenpaw, is black as the night sky. She has a fluffy tail and her pelt clings to her very lightly. Her eyes are green as green-leaf leaves. Tumblepaw, he looks exactly like a tumble weed. he is yellow with streaks of brown and darker yellow. His eyes are a light amber. Graypaw is dark gray streaks all over her light brown pelt. Her eyes are sky blue. Foxpaw's pelt is red like a fox. He has a very bushy tail. He has almost a white mask on his face. His eyes are the color of heather. Specklepaw has a beautiful tortoiseshell cat. Her eyes are an icy blue. He never thinks his blindness a disability. She thinks it is a great gift, and that it will take him far. Oakpaw does not know his father, but thinks he is close by, and watches over him some where.
He was made apprentice last of all of his siblings, obviusly because he was blind... But, never the less, Oak-kit was made Oakpaw, and Given a mentor. Young, and sort of flakey, came with the name, of Cottenpelt. His mentor. A few weeks after being named, Cottenpelt took him out. It was short, and worthless. Cottenpelt was called away on patrol, and, he was sent back with another warrior to camp. Because he was blind. The second time, Oakpaw smelled a Rouge, and they went back. Soon after that, Foxpaw said that he would train him, teach him all that he knew.
Name: Oakpaw
Gender: tom
Clan: ShadowClan
Age: 13 moons
Rank: apprentice
Personality: Oakpaw is a very bold and modest cat. He respects all his elder cats, no matter if he likes them or not. Being that he is brave, taking charge of hectic situations seems to come naturally to this young almost warrior. He is looking forward to becoming a warrior, and can't wait. Oakpaw admires his dark-pelted leader, and would love to be deputy, just, not to him. Darkstar, isn't the best of cats, or so he thinks. Oakpaw knows of RougeClan's and ShadowClan's obvious alliance. He despises bragging and boasting. Oakpaw is quiet most of the time, but, he is very polite, and obeys orders most of the time. When Oakpaw was a kit, he wanted to hunt and train. To him, it looked alot more fun and challenging, than galaranting around the nursery day and night. He gets up at dawn, and sneaks out of camp to try and train himself, seeing how Cottenpelt has not been training him. There always has to be something else happening... And, also, every once in awhile, Oakpaw wakes to hear him creeping out of the den, and leaveing camp.
Appearance: Oakpaw has a brown-gray coat with a hint of orange splashed into the mix. It is not fully grown yet, but, it seems to be growing into a handsome, meidium sized glowing mixture of colors. Oakpaw also only has minimum body bulid, but has a slim figure for he rarly eats. He has rich yellow brown eyes, with dark brown markings above both of them. His pads are coffee bean colored with jet black claws. Oakpaw's claws are sharp, and his teeth are white. His coat is thick and glossy, and clings to her like a magnate to a refrigerator. Oakpaw's ears are large and beautiful. Nice and evened out. The most surprising thing about him, is that he is blind. It dose not keep him from playing with his siblings, It actually makes his senses sharper. He has to sniff, and hear where they are. Oakpaw has white down along the rig of his spine, and it goes down to her tail.
History: Oakpaw's mother is Treeleg, but he does not know what she looks like. By the way she speaks he knows what a wonderful cat, and a wonderful mother she is. Oakpaw has 5 siblings. Ravenpaw, is black as the night sky. She has a fluffy tail and her pelt clings to her very lightly. Her eyes are green as green-leaf leaves. Tumblepaw, he looks exactly like a tumble weed. he is yellow with streaks of brown and darker yellow. His eyes are a light amber. Graypaw is dark gray streaks all over her light brown pelt. Her eyes are sky blue. Foxpaw's pelt is red like a fox. He has a very bushy tail. He has almost a white mask on his face. His eyes are the color of heather. Specklepaw has a beautiful tortoiseshell cat. Her eyes are an icy blue. He never thinks his blindness a disability. She thinks it is a great gift, and that it will take him far. Oakpaw does not know his father, but thinks he is close by, and watches over him some where.
He was made apprentice last of all of his siblings, obviusly because he was blind... But, never the less, Oak-kit was made Oakpaw, and Given a mentor. Young, and sort of flakey, came with the name, of Cottenpelt. His mentor. A few weeks after being named, Cottenpelt took him out. It was short, and worthless. Cottenpelt was called away on patrol, and, he was sent back with another warrior to camp. Because he was blind. The second time, Oakpaw smelled a Rouge, and they went back. Soon after that, Foxpaw said that he would train him, teach him all that he knew.
